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Hooting And A Chit, Chit, Chatter Monkeys jumping from limb to limb In the trees above Leaves rattle as the limbs are Bounced and pounced While back on their route A two-day trip to the family tree “Ouch!” Muse said With a splinter in his finger All the monkeys stop to get a peek One starts scratching another helps They all start picking and eating Fleas off each other’s back Monkeys jumping from limb to limb In the trees above Leaves rattle as the limbs are Bounced and pounced While back on their route A one-day trip to the family tree “Oops! “ Muse said Couldn’t quite reach the limb he flinched and fell to the ground Like a coconut falling onto dry brittle leaves below With a goose egg bump on the top of his head, He opened his eyes to discover the sight of another Monkey see, monkey do Monkeys jumping from limb to limb In the trees above Leaves rattle as the limbs are Bounced and pounced While back on their route To the family tree Hooting and a chit, chit, chatter They all came to a screeching halt A river stands in their way “Oh my, what are we to do?” One said They all gathered by the bank Intertwining their tails and legs with Stretched out arms, making a monkey chain With the best swimmer in the lead Muse safely got them across To the other side Where their family tree resides Hooting and a chit, chit, chatter With the rest of the monkeys Who were waiting to greet their guests That were on a quest © By Eve Roper 7/23/2015

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Date: 7/27/2015 11:29:00 PM
Awesome pen Eve! Wit always wins dear ! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:17:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma , thank you for your support and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/26/2015 12:49:00 AM
This was such fun. Thank you for the smiles Eve. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, I'm glad it made you smile. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/25/2015 11:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend. I love monkeys, my friend had one decades ago- the little bugger gave tons of delight just watching its antics! Great poem.. A7
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:27:00 PM
Thank you, Robert,for your support and seven. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/25/2015 10:57:00 PM
EVE. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:26:00 PM
Skat, thank you so very much for joining and picking my poem in the contest. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 7/25/2015 6:06:00 PM
many congrats Eve i loved this fun write:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2015 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, you're always so gracious with your support. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/25/2015 12:50:00 PM
It's fun! Love the story and the rhytmic repetition made it sound better when recited out loud. Goof luck! I did not get to enter that contest. It filled up so fast! hugs!
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Date: 7/25/2015 6:53:00 PM
Kim, thank you for reading my goofy poem and for your support. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/24/2015 8:19:00 PM
what a winsome romp, eve...well done!.. huggs
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you,Nette. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/24/2015 4:50:00 PM
Eve, a fun and delightful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, let me tell you. ..
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, B.W., for your support and the 7 . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/24/2015 4:19:00 AM
great fun write for children - lovely imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, just wanted to write something different. I did enter it in Skat's sponsored free verse contest at the last min. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/24/2015 2:55:00 AM
Eve, I can picture the monkeys here hanging and playing among branches... funny cute picture! =') ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Olive, I'm tickled it made you smile then I did what I set out to accomplish. Hugs Eve

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