Hooker

He mistook her for a hooker
                     And you bet, she’ll not forget
Thought she’s painted, she ain’t tainted
                     And for sure now, she is sore
       
As to whether wearing feather
                  On your thong is simply wrong
Or if lace around one’s face
                    At the heart makes one a tart

There are many for a penny
                         Who deflower by the hour   
And they’re mainly dressed plain-janely 
                 Better wake up, it’s a shake up!

Check your mirror, see it clearer
         It’s your mind, that’s what you’ll find
Stop expecting, start correcting
       Though she’s scented, she ain’t rented
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Romios Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 2:33 PM
Hi Mike~ i found nothing raunchy in your write. Probably nobody ever met a hooker or talk to one or find out what goes on with them. it’s easier to sit in your car and judge and being nasty and superior. Cheating on spouses or lovers is common. And since Covid …now it’s idone online.. Human beings, are judging other people, better judge themselves. I love your sense of humor and reality. Great, Mike, just great,Pangie xxxxx
Gentile Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Thank you so much Pangie for your kind words xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 11:06 AM
They come across as cheap and saucy, but really not raunchy 'Though she's scented, she ain't rented'. Well penned Mike, such a clever write. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Gentile Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Jennifer, thank you so much!
Seeker Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 9:56 PM
the peril of judging by looking merely at outer form
Gentile Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Jokingly so but yep!, Thank you Seeker!!!
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Unusually raunchy there, my friend.
Gentile Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 3:42 AM
Nah, just a little humor GW!!! Happy Friday !!!
Lane Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 3:03 PM
LOL Mike, your internal rhymes go perfectly with your end rhymes. I feel inspired to write limericks... These lines are terrific.
Gentile Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Thank you Lin xxoo
Allison Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 2:30 PM
ha ha ha my dad used to call them 'ropey trophy's or mutton dressed as lamb - your fashion faux pas poem sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx'
Gentile Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Thank you Jan, Happy Friday xxoo
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