Hooked

Smoke a little weed, drink a little drink, there's nothing to it are so you think, but before you keep going you need to take a good look because underneath there lies a hook. So you do a little here, you do a little there the high is real good and you just don't care, but before you know it your goose is cooked, the jonez is on cause you've been Hooked. Now you're a child of the night and you know this is not right but the hook within controls your body and mind and will lead you the wrong way every time.

So you try to resist but to no avail because that hook has got you hooked and it's taking you through pure hell. You see that hook is very deep and this is so true, but that's what you get when you deal get the Devil's brew. Now the doctor's will tell you that it's a disease, but it's that hook that's bringing you to your knees. Look how the hook is designed, and it has a one track mind. It don't know up, only down and it will take your crown. Then it will make you give up the fight and that's when it will turn out the light.

You know it has to be removed, only if you could, but you can't do it and it will start to even make death look good. Yes that hook is a very bad thing and this is no lie, take it for a joke and it will hang your ass out to dry. It will flopping around like a fish out of water, while bringing and making life harder and harder. There is a way out if you would like to know, God is good and He's the way to go. God will remove the hook and not just break the line, while leaving the hook within and still driving you out of your mind.

You see leaving the hook in and just breaking the line, will having you going to meeting ever day, while praying to God, you don't slip and loose your way. For Jesus died for us on the cross He gave His life so we wouldn't be lost. So you can turn to Lord Jesus when your life is in shambles or when somethings on you that you can't handle. So think before you do your next drug or take your next drink. STOP, take a good look because underneath, there lies a HOOK.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/16/2015 9:12:00 AM
Satan makes sin look so inviting but the end of which is death..Sad isn't it..A person can change though..God will give the person the strength to go the right way..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Milton Robertson
Date: 6/17/2015 6:47:00 AM
Thank you much Sara. The Lord will bring you through. Be Blessed.
Date: 6/5/2015 8:13:00 AM
Hi Milton...like unwary fish, people (mostly young) are attracted by the bait, not realizing that there is a hidden hook that can very well prove fatal. Your poem is both educational, helpful and encouraging. Help is there for those who seek it, both material and spiritual. #7 // paul
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Date: 6/5/2015 7:16:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I pray that this message reach people, especially young people. There's no good in that hook.
Date: 6/4/2015 9:22:00 PM
A very well expressed warning! You have also pointed people in the right direction.
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Milton Robertson
Date: 6/5/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thank you much, I am trying to do exactly that.
Date: 6/4/2015 7:52:00 PM
This is fun and accessible. If we could all pray with the sense of humor, as you write with humor, I have this sense that our prayers would be more effective, both individually and collectively. Enjoyed this. And thx too for your comment and visit in my direction.
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Milton Robertson
Date: 6/5/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thank you much, I am glad you enjoyed it and got the message. I pray others will too.
Date: 6/4/2015 5:17:00 PM
Milton, An interesting write. Sounds like you are speaking from experience. If so, I'm glad you were able to get "unhooked". You are right: God is good! Nice rhythm to this and inspirational as well. Love, KIm
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Date: 6/4/2015 5:28:00 PM
Yes I have been there and this is how I know, God is the way to go. Now I am unhooked. Thank you Kim for your lovely comment. GOD BLESS...
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