Hoodoo Sea

Capt'n Jack ‘ere and dead I be
drowned in the Hoodoo Sea.
Fire lit the sky as we sailed by
not far from Bim’ni.

Dey say ders nothin’ strange out der
off de coast of Bim’ni.
But dey’v naught seen de ‘alf of it
de compass spinnin’ free.

Columbus sawr it too dey say
or so ‘is log records.
A blindin’ light, a fire ball
stunn’d all of de yeo men on board.

Some say it were a meteor
some ‘allucination
Others say it’s a mystery
yarn'd by lower stations.

Dey say ders nothin’ strange out der
Off de coast of Bim’ni
But dey’v naught seen de ‘alf of it
De compass spinnin’ free

Fishermen ‘ere ‘ave der own lore
and say ‘ere monsters be.
Some name the dev’ls triangle
I calls it Hoodoo sea....

*The mystery of the Bermuda Triangle brought to you by Capt'n Jack
please feel free to write me music!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 2:52 PM
I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Debbie, Quite interesting mystery piece, Congratulations on your accomplished victory. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Unsolved Mysteries" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:18 PM
really cool Debbie and I do love the lingo. Awesome job of it. congratulations
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Great verse babe! great win too. Edgar Cayce had a woman looking for a well at Bimini in the 1940s. Atlantis remnant. Yes you have been on the sea old time sailor be. Capn Jack. xo, Don
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Great write Debbie. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM
VEry cute, Debs. Congrats on your win!
Richards Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Love the Capt'n's lingo....Hoodoo what you do...so well !!?? Only YOOODOO! :)
Mehta Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 3:01 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carolyn, debbie
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Deb, ye 'ad me bustin' my seams readin' this tale of Capt'n Jack and the Bermuda Triangle. And there is something out there off the coast of Bimini -- the Bimini Road -- which has yet to be explained by anyone and thought to have been a road in the lost continent of Atlantis. Great humor here. Did you kow the "Dragon's Triangle" is exactly on the opposite side of the globe from the "Devil's Triangle"? Congratulations on your win in the mystery contest. Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 5:15 AM
SENSATIONAL!!! BRILLIANT!!!! You are a first class poet, Deb. Sure to top the winners circle. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 10:22 PM
fairly excellent poet almost very good, posted ya potry almost sort of would:) great hey, xo, Don
Soulfire Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Ahoy Debbie! This is so much fun. I Love the "Capt'n Jack" character (flavour).
Warden Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Soup mail...
Poet Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 6:24 PM
A mystery indeed!Glad to read your 1001st poem here at soup......:)
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