Honolulu Lawyer

There was once a lawyer from Honolulu
Who always suffered from flu
He never stood before the judge
If he was offered a fudge
And a ticket to the land of the zulu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Many congratulations Tahera on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations for H>M> win for Honolulu Lawyer, Tahera
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:13 PM
congrats for your hm, The rhymes were real cute. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in the Limerick contest... enjoy my friend on this happy Sunday ..with luv..
Freeman Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations, Tahera, on your successful presentation. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Fun limerick. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Fun images in your limerick, Tahera. Congratulations on your placement! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 11:57 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 11:24 PM
A whimsical limerick. good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 9:39 PM
A nice humrous write, Tahera. Good luck in the contest and thank your for your comment on my poem Quo Vadis.
Devonshire Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 8:03 AM
:) Thank you for supporting my contest, Tahera! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Really cute one Tahera... good luck in the contest.. a neat write.. am leaving Italy Thursday.. flying to Mississippi to see my son in hospital there for a few days... then returning to my home ..hubby on board...haha.. and in a week or so will send u your souvenir gift for your first prize win... hope u will like..luv..ciao...
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August 24, 2010 at 6:13 AM
what is zulu??
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