Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Honolulu Fire - New

fresh scent of his shirt, pressed
to my nose — Honolulu fire

frangipani and hibiscus passion
(too hot for the millennials)

fine-wine aged, luxuriant tastes.
Oh, Babe!

3/13/2019
What I Love Contest
Sponsor- Maureen McGreavy

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Carole Duet March 14, 2019 at 12:38 AM It's all about the scent...and the taste. Mmmm...right Kim? Yes! And, yes to your short and sweet poem. :D Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2019 at 8:34 AM I enjoy reading comments...LOL! A good marriage that enjoys the seasons of life...the tantalizing taste of every inch of the coastline ;)

Gershon Wolf March 13, 2019 at 10:07 PM Maureen's already in love with this, Kim, and she hasn't even read it yet! Super! :) gw Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2019 at 10:08 PM LOL! Thanks my friend! :)