Honing Flesh

Seatless, with your best last breath,

nakedly being blessed,

being surrounded by white walls
and a waltz-

this wake-up in the dark is a phase of your in-kin,

finding their next bike-spin,

pleasantly yet vaguely obeying the jim.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:21 PM
An entertaining write.
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April 24, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Thanks Mr Lamoureux
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