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Honey Dippers

Honey Dippers bees caress petals blend sweet nectar honey comb pressing fun yummy treat tea for two honeyed sweet tasty lips delightful succulent the bees knees By: Debra Squyres 2/14/13 For: Member Contest "Ellip"

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Dan Helppi

Date: 11/1/2014 10:21:00 PM

Sweeet. I have heard "the bees knees," but I am almost 40.

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 1:11:00 PM

Debra congrats on your win...David

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 3/5/2013 6:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win Debra, this is a brilliant master piece :) , wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, Yanny

David Fisher

Date: 3/5/2013 8:05:00 AM

Way to go on your win! Your poem is all the buzz!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/5/2013 7:13:00 AM

This is the "Bees Knees"!...congrats to you..BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 3/5/2013 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your First place win with this sweet Ellip!!!!! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:46:00 AM

Top spot, well done Debra xx

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/4/2013 12:34:00 PM

A great win, Debra! Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 10:08:00 AM

Debra, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/4/2013 7:03:00 AM

Debra I remember reading this before and I know it would win. Congratulations on your #1 placement. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/4/2013 3:14:00 AM

This elip is 'the bees knees' Debra (and so are you) Congratulations my friend!-Tim

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 9:55:00 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win Debra

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/19/2013 11:05:00 PM

love it Debbie,,, reminded me of Robert Plant & The Honeydrippers - Sea Of Love 1982 watch it on utube ;}

Donna Jones

Date: 2/17/2013 6:13:00 PM

Very cute!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 2/17/2013 12:39:00 PM

I really like the words you have woven to make this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2013 12:25:00 PM

I just thought of Winnie the Pooh ...... He was in your mind when you wrote this sweet honey poem Debra (?) ..... lol .... - It is a lovely poem. - Have a beautiful Sunday afternoon. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres
Date: 2/17/2013 12:34:00 PM

Twas actually meant to have a two fold meaning...not sure I carried it off. lol But, yes, I can see how this would bring one's mind to Winnie the Pooh !!

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/17/2013 10:46:00 AM

A rhythmic rhyme sweet and sublime. Delightful to the senses. Who cares if honey bees have knees or if it's comprehensive. Just having fun with a little pun so please don't take it beesily. :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 2/16/2013 10:02:00 PM

Hi the Ho!! I like this one very much. Just what are "bees knees" ? Do bees really have knees? Take care, keep om writing, Jancarl

Debra Squyres
Date: 2/16/2013 11:11:00 PM

It is suppose to have a double meaning...pollen on the bees legs (knees, hmmm do they have them?? who knows lol) The bees knees is an expression meaning "Cool" ....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 8:34:00 PM

oh this is cute. It reminds me of footles style in a way. Love that old expression bees knees. I bet the new generation does not even know it. And my favorite one of this set is the tea for two with those honeyed lips!!

Pam Woolford

Date: 2/16/2013 1:27:00 PM

This is a sweet little poem Deb. Pam x

David Williams

Date: 2/15/2013 4:56:00 AM

Debra very sweet, good luck...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2013 1:35:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..I need to check out this form..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/14/2013 9:38:00 AM

Debra what a wonderful Elip. Light and airy filled with sweet thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2013 8:09:00 AM

This is a wonderful entry into the Ellip contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful bee enhanced poem this morning! What an enlightening piece, a Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/14/2013 7:48:00 AM

Lovely and sweet! :) Thanks for sharing!