Honesty, Take Two

a trilonnet

Take honesty, really does it matter?
By evasion truth can be suppressed.
Lies are critical in the new world view.

If it serves the cause, who cares if it’s true?
How do you expect one to keep abreast
with all that’s on a partisan platter?

Changing the question with so much natter
has thrown me when I’ve cheated in the past,
leaves a gut feeling that threats will ensue.

Though I have not always thought this one through,
by and large, candid stands up to the test.
Cunning or candor, I'll take the latter.

I know, and I know another who knows;
when life is over, it’s truth He'll expose.


by Reason A. Poteet
revision of an earlier 5 minute challenge piece - Honesty 
written with more structure as a triolonnet
for the final piece, see Honesty, Take Three
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 19, 2013 at 1:10 PM
CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Nice summing up of your poem. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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June 19, 2013 at 2:39 AM
Great revision on your original poem congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Hendricks Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Honestly a good piece (lol). I like your "partisan platter" phrase. Good writing, Reason. Licia :-)
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 1:26 PM
spectacular range of imagery, honest as a heart so pure... fascinating write, reason!..:) huggs
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May 27, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Yours is the first piece I've read here...anywhere for a long time. Bold and subtle, subtle and bold. Really enjoyed it. Thank you.
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