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Helloww my sweet soupersz, 

An etheree after ages; for Inkszyz contest 

Is homesick stardust my other name, cuz my initials say so lol, oopsiez

~ Wilderness of Want ~ 

 

 

 

 

Homesick Stardust

confess to me , O cupid prince , lost cause ~ bowing before eve's bare butterflies, as tonight i confront your kiss, heartbeat of harvested heat, pulsing moon magnifique ~ where we wake within the wrinkled wish of burgundy blushed bliss ~ drenched with drizzling damask dreams of sea-swept hours; let the lace of want weep wilderness in the rise of lonely nadir where, I beseech the sun to undress the stars and twirl with satanic sighs… if I am your refrain, let my name burn dear, aphrodisiac tears of sunset ~ see how I break, 'neath neon nimbus, hold me close in sultry sirens , tempt me… tame these twilight tints tantalise me… once more until the honest halcyon of life weeps wayward with the hush of unhealed hoax , amidst hurt homesickness… tortured by the taste of your touch, locked in love ~ I ache with parched lips of pink… the soul of barbie stardust ~ as this petal, a l o n e , mourns those musks drenched in au revoir rain of last rose dusks…
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Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 8:53 PM
I second every comment below and add only this: Magnifique, Maestra!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 5:51 PM
You know what Inky likes. I too love the etheree poetry form. Beautiful job. Also, thanks for my placement in your last contest 💕
Goldsmith Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 1:59 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Great Shape with Pretty Pictures. Love This..."Good Luck." I did "Wilderness Of Want. What Do You Want?" Have a fun day writing away.........
Gibbons Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 1:54 PM
Wow magnificent write ✍️dear hiya so love how you've shapped this too. Powerful message 🙌 "pulsing moon" love the moon 🌙 🌚 ♥️ " the stars and twirl " " aphrodisiac tears of sunset ~" 🌇 paints a beautiful yearning ." the soul of barbie stardust" great description of ur beautiful 2nd pic. 1st pic sheer beauty searching for love n affection ❣️ hugzzz 🫂gud luck in comp 💋💋💋
Jones Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful presentation and wonderfully written! Very engaging and passionate!
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