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Homesick - Understepping

The sound of dripping rain caressing  Damp scenery overjoyed the cling The yearn brought me home to the old times Blend yearn through under-stepping rhymes Carry the sway along even hard Smother the taste, touched sense deeper in Note: Read first word first line Second word second line Third word third line Fourth word fourth line Fifth word fifth line Sixth word sixth line

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Date: 1/6/2013 7:34:00 AM
I LUV THIS PIECE
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/6/2013 7:35:00 PM
Thanks Allan pleasured to see your comment :D, hug, yanny
Date: 12/31/2012 3:03:00 PM
Yanny I like this , you too are into this puzzle form...David
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thanks David, I just tried to explore through these words :D glad that you like it :D

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