Homeless

Through deep despair were grown my homesick tears,
Worn by an inmate boxed in cement pine,
That cried for walls remembered through the years,
Forgotten treasures thought by me as mine;
Where laughter smiled when clouds of summer stirred,
And always rain would form inviting pools;
And abject fate was fate true-love deferred,
By leaps that bound hot-water ‘round in spools;
But my prison-cell locks memories stark,
Incarcerating what now fades to grey;
Sentenced forevers lost in wilderness dark,
That haven’t learned what freedom means today;
  A fire burned bright but now smolders smokeless,
  Imprisons visions streamed – lonely and homeless.

10/23/16
Submitted for Seeker's Homeless Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/24/2016 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet, absolutely stunning... Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/23/2016 10:46:00 PM
Excellent poem describing the term homeless. My best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 10/22/2016 9:31:00 AM
Wow you have spoken for homeless well and your writing is great. :) I wish you luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/22/2016 9:25:00 AM
Hi Phillip, You have managed to "speak" for the homeless in your favorite form. I enjoy reading your Sonnets because they express your thoughts very well. I wish you luck in the "Homeless"contest. Thanks for visiting my page:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/22/2016 8:34:00 AM
Stiff competition in this homeless contest. The last two lines are killer, an affecting piece throughout.
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Date: 10/22/2016 7:22:00 AM
dear Philip, I enjoy your sonnets...this is so nicely written....there is pain ....imprisoned visions...homelessness..., good luck in the contest//love, Anu:)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/22/2016 7:25:00 AM
Many thanks as always. Did you prepare a piece for this as well? I'll have to saunter over to your area and peruse if you don't mind
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