Homeless - Final Destination

Laying on a dark street corner 
the flames of a makeshift fire 
the only sign of light 
and a frugal attempt at warmth, 
on a cold winter’s night 
lost in thought, 
or so it seems 
confused and helpless... 

stuck in a time zone, 
unfairly treated 
unnoticed 
uncared-for 
all alone 
tattered clothes 
a testimony of neglect 
it’s merely an illusion... 

look a little closer 
at the laughing lines, 
look a little closer 
at the sparkle in his eyes... 
there is no fear 
a hidden smile perhaps 
as he struggles for a breath of air, 
last words uttered…

“I am ready... He is waiting” 
the words of a homeless man 
on his final destination...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/18/2011 8:49:00 AM
wow, sad and yet so good for this man who is totally prepared to meet his maker. A very good one I found back here today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:45:00 AM
Too many turn their heads and look the other way. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:28:00 PM
This is a wonderfully worded poem Wilma, so full of feeling....very well written. june x
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