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Home Sweet Home

Home Sweet Home Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Haven of safety free from shadows Orchids freshly picked in the kitchen Mamma baking Dutch apple pie Eating home cooked meals every night Serenity of memories by the fireplace Wagging his tail, sweet lil' Mugsy Entertaining family every Sunday Entering I feel a dependable refuge Together our house becomes a home Habitual prayers at the dinner table Origins of roots through generations My home is a harborage glued with love Elated security built from scratch Date Written: January 31, 2016

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John Hamilton

Date: 2/11/2016 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Laura for a very nice entry. With more flow would have placed higher! Sorry for belated comment.

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2016 10:26:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2016 9:36:00 AM

This is a top winner for me Laura. I love how you included the family dog. Congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane

Date: 2/9/2016 5:49:00 AM

Sounds like a wonderfully warm and inviting home, Luloo. Congratulations on your placing.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2016 9:28:00 PM

Wonderful write, Laura!!! Congratulations on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" win. :) Hugs, Eve

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/4/2016 1:42:00 AM

Excellent homey home acrostic, the security and warmth ooze (in a good way.) It may take more than one sit down, but I will catch up on your poems - they are a joy to me ... CayCay

Lu Loo
Date: 2/5/2016 8:32:00 AM

CayCay, thank you for all your kind feedback lady :) *smiles* -luloo

John Hardison

Date: 2/1/2016 12:16:00 AM

Captures theme very well. Sounds like a winner to me. Good Luck in contest!

Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2016 5:46:00 PM

Many thanks John *smiles* -luloo