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Home Sweat Home

A triangle top
A square foundation
A picketed white fence guarded 
by
two spotted dalmatians sitting on the
shaggiest rug that reads
"Home Sweat Home"

animalfunnyimagerysillysimplelight verse

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Pace Ink-U-Script

January 22, 2014 at 9:10 AM

lol...I like this one!!! I love the imagery.

Kira Price

January 22, 2014 at 2:44 PM

The Sweat was suppose to represent the one thing wrong with the perfect outside "traditional" family home description lol just a funny thing

Daver Austin

December 30, 2013 at 11:05 AM

These dogs aint from Kansas, eh? Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

December 26, 2013 at 12:42 AM

Hi Kira, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

December 20, 2013 at 7:21 AM

ooo, Kira, this is one of my favorite subject. home sweet home. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 20, 2013 at 3:12 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Kira ! - True ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

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