Home Nest

Sun Rises Into the Gray, white and blue Where the bird once flew Not fully recognized For all the achievements made But a purposeful flight taken Will lift other souls who took the time To stand by the values of the home nest Heidi Sands 1/20/21

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/31/2021 11:08:00 AM

Such a magnificent write dear Heidi 'Grey, white and blue, where the bird once flew.............which..........'will lift other souls who took the time, to stand by the values of the home nest.' Beautiful! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2021 1:43:00 PM

Thank you very much Jennifer. I appreciate your kind comment. :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2021 5:50:00 AM

Very nicely penned Heidi, best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2021 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/26/2021 8:13:00 PM

Heidi, Enjoying your days in 'Gray, white and blue'. We always thought they were all ours anyway. And now the home nest has flown. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2021 5:25:00 AM

Yes, these days are ours to deal with as best we can Richard. Thank you for your input :)

Judy Ball

Date: 1/26/2021 7:04:00 PM

Well said Heidi. A fine message. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2021 5:24:00 AM

Thank you Judy. I hop you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/24/2021 6:51:00 AM

I think this is a very timely metaphor Heidi and I value the message, Happy Sunday, i hope you have ben well xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2021 8:49:00 AM

Hi Mike. Great to see you again. I hope you have been well too. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy New Year and Happy Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/22/2021 1:36:00 PM

Intriguing! Silly me: I'm always following the trail of silver birds' (airplanes') flights, ignoring those of our feathered friends. Lovely penned, Heidi. Happy weekend! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2021 6:18:00 AM

lol. Thank you Gershon. Happy Weekend!