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They're getting old now.
They congregate only a few blocks south of where I live.
40 to 50 years ago they were in Vietnam.
Among the homeless they usually move slower,
The weariness of age and of other things,
of drug use and alcohol,
lost loves and families,
bent and broken paths.

You hear about the "thousand yard stare,"
where blank verse and silence show they're not actively seeing,
though now most of the immediate trauma is gone,
they are just lives forever changed,
eyes both hardened and softened,
former aspects compromised,
the hand of war still upon them.

My family had a big house in Youngstown, Ohio,
with a room rented to a nice young guy named Dale.
It was cool because he would throw the football
with me and my brothers, and talk to us.
He had short hair and a little bit of acne.
In 1967 he went to Vietnam, killed within a week.

They tell stories of night patrols, moving through water,
streams rivers rain, mud and sodden clothes,
100 degrees in the shade, bugs, infection, panic,
running through the jungle firing their M-16 behind them,
of the Vietnamese people suffering, the dead lying along the road.

Arriving in-country, the heat blasting you
when you get off the plane, you are told
look left, look right, and then that one of the two men
you just saw will not return.

Our country was then conflicted, and it was harder coming home,
even though the orange fires and the smoke were far away,
you lost a limb and they didn't appreciate it.

There were a lot of booby-traps set,
by the enemy, by the bureaucracy, by the times.

I wasn't old enough to go and I'm not sorry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/10/2016 1:36:00 AM
Doug what a very moving poem, my husband served in Vietnam and we are now better off money wise before he went, the thing is we live in Australia and our diggers get a damn good pension, our government reward them very well, so yes I do feel for these poor men and you were lucky that you were too young, thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt poem and take care.......Vera
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/10/2016 2:44:00 AM
Hi Vera. Thank you. This is a time of great "passing on" - in the U.S. 400 to 500 Vietnam veterans die every day, and the same for veterans of World War II. There were many more World War II veterans, but most are gone already, and they are substantially older.
Date: 12/8/2016 9:48:00 AM
This moved my beyond words Doug. I'm glad you weren't old enough to witness these atrocities firsthand.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/9/2016 3:10:00 PM
Point taken. : )
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Paloma P
Date: 12/8/2016 12:31:00 PM
So is shooting yourself in the foot, but I wouldn't go there...
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/8/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paloma. I confess there is some attraction. Wouldn't want to have to go, but as with being in prison, for all the negatives, it would be an experience.
Date: 12/6/2016 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Doug. I'm speechless. Well Done. Your work is very emotional and gripping. Wonderful range. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/6/2016 7:55:00 PM
You are so correct,Doug. I've only seen it through their eyes and the resulting travesties both physically and mentally. It breaks my heart in so many venues and on so many levels. Hugggs to you.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 6:01:00 PM
Hi Deborah. It's fascinating to hear the veterans' stories. There's so much there, much of it really horrible, situations that nobody would want, people doing things they wouldn't have previously thought themselves capable of.
Date: 12/6/2016 1:15:00 PM
Doug, I love your poem. As a person from that era, Ive known several men who went and their lives now are a wreck, physically. I'm giving you a 7 and a fav for this one.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 5:59:00 PM
I appreciate that, Janis. Even if we just examine one of those lives that came home, they usually affect several others.
Date: 12/6/2016 1:04:00 PM
staggering flashback of a battle that seemed to have never stopped... this is a powerful story; good you were not on the front-line, doug... impressive poem!.. huggs
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. : ) Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Date: 12/6/2016 9:37:00 AM
I lost a lot of friends in that war, though fortunately for me (and you) I just missed the draft by days and I'm not sorry about that either. Though I never bought into the "hate the soldiers" war that was brewing here at the same time. My generation preached peace and then practiced hate when the soldiers returned home. Talking out of both side of their mouths, just like the politicians they despised as well. Nicely told Doug.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 5:56:00 PM
Wow, Chris, missed the draft by days.... Hindsight being 20/20 and all that, of course, but that war was such a waste.
Date: 12/6/2016 8:24:00 AM
With the exception of my sanity, I came home intact. Many were not so fortunate. Eff'n politicians :-(
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 8:51:00 AM
I'm glad you're here, John. : )
Date: 12/6/2016 3:26:00 AM
This touched me deeply Doug because my husband was in VietNamn. He was in the U.S. Navy on the U.S.S, Constellation. He was lucky. He came home whole. But many he knew did not. A fine write my friend. Those vets deserved better. God Bless, JB
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/6/2016 3:49:00 AM
Hi Judy, thanks. Agreed - it was a bad time, and they deserved better. It's a familiar story now, and I don't even know why I started writing this tonight. Those veterans are getting old... Among the ones I've talked to, a fairly common thing is not liking helicopters - memories of the spraying of Agent Orange from overhead.
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/6/2016 3:28:00 AM
P.S. I forgot to give you your rating. A 777 from me.
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