Home (Diminished Hexaverse)

Home….

I have a new house
Not too far from here
Just a mile away
A cozy cottage
To be remodeled

The rooms need paint
It comes furnished
I’ll hang some drapes
And paintings too

I will cook
Set the table
Take a bath

Get dressed
Serve meal

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Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Well executed Diminished Hexaverse Audrey, good luck in the contest >> James
Bagnall Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:40 AM
A joy to read - good luck for the contest
Kelly Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 2:25 AM
Sounds cozy and safe , so enjoy ......
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Good luck if for the contest... a wonderful description of a lovely home .. great write ..nice and cozy .. great entry too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 3:15 PM
GREAT entry, Audrey. I really like it. Good luck. Andrea
Richards Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Home Sweet Home.....how lovely!! There is a sense of peace in this poem....home is where the heart is! :) Good luck in the contest, Audrey! ~ Love, Carrie
Nutter Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 2:56 AM
Doesn't it feel great to have a place to call home. Excellent write.
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