Home Culture

When I awake each morning,
I may be culturally alone,
my breakfast is peculiar
and to many be unknown.

Procedure may be unaccepted,
nor traditional as such,
but seeing it’s my culture,
to others shouldn’t matter much.

If I blend garlic with ice cream;
eat apples with tomato sauce,
and I do this in my own home,
then it is cultural of course.

It is my culture … my desire,
to eat the way I do,
it is the way I choose to live,
and just the same as you.

And naturally your culture,
will be different to mine,
if it’s restricted to your home,
then everything is fine.

But when a brash invader,
comes uninvited through my door,
and tries to push their will on me,
this leads to cultural war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/10/2016 11:39:00 AM
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:51:00 AM
real good write Lindsay, rather enjoyed it, you've interesting food mixtures!! well penned!
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:31:00 PM
G'day Gordon ... thanks for your kind comment. Believe me, the food mix is only an example - Lindsay
Date: 2/7/2016 11:03:00 AM
What a great subtle way to tell the world, my home is my castle. Don't push your ways on me. Really enjoyed.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 7:29:00 PM
Hello Pete ... deep down, we all want to protect our castle where possible and we don't want to give it up easily - thank you Pete - Lindsay
Date: 2/7/2016 4:06:00 AM
Ah, Lindsay...this is one reason why you're one of my fav poets here. You write of glaring issues with such delicacy and even a touch of humor. Well done. 7. hugs!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 7:24:00 PM
Hello Kim ... crikey Kim, you are too kind with your comments - thanks again - Lindsay
Date: 2/5/2016 2:37:00 PM
this is deep. PD
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:14:00 PM
G'day Poet Destroyer A ... thanks for reading and leaving a comment - Lindsay
Date: 2/4/2016 10:28:00 PM
Oh Lindsay we do have our own cultures and it is no one's business if we do have tomato sauce with ice cream, it is our own preference, we all live differently, I bet there is no one who lives the same in this world, take care........Vera
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 7:12:00 PM
Hello Vera ... too right, we do have our own culture and we can mix with people of other cultures but none should be destroyed. The food mix is only an example - thank you Vera - Lindsay
Date: 2/2/2016 3:21:00 PM
and what to do when that strange culture invades our lands and does wants to do things that are not acceptable (for moral reasons) to the host country? this is where the REAL war heats up!! Provocative writing, my friend!!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... we must be educated for change I believe because when our lifestyle is threatened to appease ... well; history can remind us of the consequences - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 2/2/2016 12:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this whilst eating my kippers and vegemite sandwich, Lindsay, sod 'em all, eh? regards, Viv
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Date: 2/9/2016 6:12:00 PM
G'day Cobber ... yep, the language is buggered, our diet is non existent, we're all rooned; bring back the fifties. Nah; the good thing about the good old days is they're gone. Thanks Viv - Lindsay
Date: 2/1/2016 5:05:00 PM
Deep and thoughtful nice poem xoxoxo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 6:05:00 PM
G'day Aurore ... thanks for commenting Aurore. I'll catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 2/1/2016 10:27:00 AM
Very meaningful, Lindsay. This is what is happening in many countries. Uninvited 'guests' are tolerated, but they want to impose on their hosts, which does not make sense! // paul
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:58:00 PM
Hello Paul ... you have hit the nail on the head - thanks again Paul - Lindsay
Date: 1/31/2016 11:38:00 PM
here we just have whipped cream fights and everyone win!!!! Great poem!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 5:45:00 PM
Hello Arthur ... thanks mate. We used to have water fights and there were no winners - Lindsay
Date: 1/28/2016 7:47:00 AM
A complicated issue that many cannot understand. The problem arises when what some do at home wafts out the door and affects the rest of us. The folks doing it tend to be blind or in denial as to what is happening or they simply don't care. But yes, what we do at home (if it does not impinge on others) should be our own business.
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:30:00 PM
Correct Duke ... thanks for dropping by. It's our own governments that seem to be dragging us into a world order where we must keep in step - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 1/28/2016 4:47:00 AM
well expressed Lindsay, excellent write...you've said it well
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:24:00 PM
Hello white sage ... thanks for commenting. In these times, it appears our way of life is under threat - Lindsay
Date: 1/28/2016 3:56:00 AM
This is brilliant Lindsay. Diversity is what makes the world such an interesting place. Bravo! #7
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Connie ... I have learnt so much from other cultures and I am pleased about that. It's our own politicians who seem to want change - Lindsay
Date: 1/27/2016 8:00:00 PM
Very well said Laurie. You've described liberty with an example that anyone can understand. Well worded and well written.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/9/2016 5:11:00 PM
Hello Louis ... thanks for commenting. Everybody's culture appears under threat for one reason or another - Linsday
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