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. A man sits in a room legs folded head down a pen rolling around in front he grabs draws the words of multiple colors the colors change with what the words offer the ceiling, walls, and floor white empty besides the man and his colors some green here some red there orange splat and yellow sprays purple spills, indigo is in the air he continues for days and days until the white is gone his legs arms and body strong to the imagination this feat belongs there is no where left for color so then he sketched the door and sat back on the floor stared for hours at this door afraid to escape what he creates finally the nerve gathered he reached for the handle bum bum.. bum bum.. bum bum his heart in great suspense the knob he turned the door swung open .gasp. to his surprise with his lonely eyes there were more there were more people with colors everywhere minds creating there own but together the pictures had grown into a connected life of there own so he ran his footsteps and breath his heart, mind and soul left tracks of color meshed with rest no longer alone the man had found home

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Date: 5/29/2014 12:41:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kevin :) - I choose your first written free verse poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:44:00 PM
Kevin, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/28/2014 5:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kevin. Enjoyed this poem and your thought process. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:23:00 AM
Wonderful ending, Kevin,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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