Home

what is home they ask
where does it exist
is it a place in your mind or heart
or is it just a myth
home is not a place that houses expensive 
toys and treats
home is a place inside your mind that 
exists only when you please
home is where the people are who truly 
count in life
and how do you know which ones they 
are,i ask this every night
you try and figure who builds you up,who 
makes you a better person
and who tears you down,throws you 
around and helps you not to learn
god's lessons are in a deep disguise that 
we know nothing about
until the time comes that we get there and 
are ALLOWED to figure it out
where is home,with 
friends,family,laughs,good food,good times
or is it where you feel at peace in your own 
heart and your own mind
or is it both?????

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/11/2012 2:44:00 PM
This is moving it reminds me of a poem i called homely home.Good write.i enjoyed.
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Brittany Carroll
Date: 4/14/2012 10:38:00 AM
well thank you very much!!! it does?? similar messge,or just similar wording?? thank you for taking the time to comment. always,brittany*rae
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