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Fragile petals for your feet strewn across Earth’s lawn, Miniscule sacrifices bleed from your minstrel pawn, Would that nature’s silver starred celestial corridor, Guide this pawn to Your supernatural golden shore, Your milky galaxy draws me on this nightly walk, Lifts me higher … pulls me .. To Thee my Rock.. Ahh beauty! It’s time to walk back to my house alone, One day, I’ll keep on walking with You .. to my home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 4/9/2011 8:05:00 PM
a very creative piece of poetry.
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Date: 3/12/2011 1:00:00 PM
This is wonderful, Robert! Great use of metaphore.."Fragile petals...strew across the lawn". For sure this rock, who might be your anchor, will read this and her heart will melt. This is lovely, Robert! Best to you and yours, Mikki
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:50:00 AM
wow, i reread this to really get the complete meaning. You too delivered on description with this profound little beauty. I hope more people see it!
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