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Bring pheasants bring cartwheels Bring dark hallowed halls Bring the quiet whisper Whom no one thought to call Bring a lamp A can A crucifix Someone to lean against Bring my mother My son In the dark and disorder I won't go on alone Without a home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 10:08:00 AM
I like this and the flow of it works very well. It didn't register at first because the opening line is so anocronistic: it just doesn't seem like the sort of statement from a modern poem. And yet it fits so well into the narrative and creates an ideal and in doing so creates questions for the reader. What more can one expect?
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