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The child loves to go to the park and pick up sticks.
Like a dog, he will try to bring 
one impossibly long stick home,
but he is 4 and by 4 o’clock
he is getting tired.

He still will not let go of one end.
He totters to the car like this,
at the carpark 
he is actually sleepwalking.

I wake up, 
a wandering hermit crab slips back into its shell.
Time concertinas, 
the mind plays tricks in too much light or dark.

It’s 4 in the morning, 
I’ve been gripping the end of a twisted sheet.

Strange, 
but I want to take it home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Hello Eric Ashford, now that is a strange dream you had. It seemed so real to you,that when you awoke you had the blanket instead. Have a nice day my friend.
Ashford Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thanks for the comments Darlene, Always good to get your feedback. Yes, enjoy your day also!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Very cool poem, an audible "Ahhh" producing piece. :)))
Ashford Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 9:04 AM
Hey, thanks Maureen. Doing my time-slip thing again. Have a good one.
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