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Holy Is the Lamb-Anaphora

Life comes out of a woman's womb! Life makes the new born cry! Life has has only four stages! Life can be holy or damned! Life offers happiness to a few! Life condemns many to sadness! Life battles with death daily, Life lives in me, but it has no thrill!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2014 11:50:00 AM

- CONGRATULATIONS !!! - A great 5th place in the contest - Enjoy reading it, Andrew ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2014 11:03:00 AM

Dear Andrew, much of what you describe is very true, but I hate to think your life has "no thrill." Wish I could raise your spirits, my friend. Congrats on your win. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/6/2014 7:24:00 AM

Dropping again to congratulate you, Andrew

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/5/2014 10:58:00 PM

Congratulations Andrew on your awesome write that has claim a 5th placement in my contest! Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2014 10:15:00 AM

Beautiful use of Anaphora and nice feelings, Andrew