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A hollowed heart, still beating A lightning of misfortune forked into it Puncturing the surface Yet it didn't shatter to smithereens Isn't it strange? Could it be made of steel? There's now a gaping hole In the heart's core Yet it still beats a steady rhythm How can that be? Isn't it supposed to cease All function cold turkey? A hollowed heart, still thriving Slowly healing by the warmth Of sunlight penetrating the aperture May this resilient heart Never tear or splinter in half May the wound steadily shrink Eventually sealed shut By the love inside Hollow Poetry Contest/Winner(7th Place) Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen Date written and posted: 06/12/2018

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Date: 7/9/2021 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The heart can go through so much and keep on beating. A wonderful write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/10/2021 4:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 7/8/2021 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/10/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj:-)
Date: 9/28/2018 8:42:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thanks again for the congratulations, Line! It means a lot to me:-)
Date: 8/30/2018 9:23:00 AM
Back again. Congratulations. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2018 1:21:00 PM
Thanks yet again, Susan!:-)
Date: 8/28/2018 9:48:00 PM
Such a brave and hopeful write, love the closing lines, congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Michelle!:-)
Date: 8/28/2018 10:32:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win. Well done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks again, Susan!:-) Much appreciated.
Date: 6/20/2018 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/21/2018 11:58:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!:-)
Date: 6/16/2018 7:50:00 PM
Well done, Edward. These could be words to a very sad song of lost love! Congratulations on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 8:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carrie!:-)
Date: 6/16/2018 5:15:00 PM
Well deserved congrats on your win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line!:-) Most appreciated!
Date: 6/16/2018 11:48:00 AM
Edward congratulations on your win in the contest. Hope you are having a great day. Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 12:49:00 PM
Many many thanks for your support, Constance!:-) Much appreciated!
Date: 6/16/2018 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Edward, eventually it the heart will heal. Hugs Eve ~' *
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank you very, Eve!:-) Much obliged.
Date: 6/16/2018 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Heidi! xoxo
Date: 6/16/2018 7:29:00 AM
Hi Ed, Nicely done, congrats on your winning poem! Anthony
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, Anthony!:-) I'm humbled beyond words!

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