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Hollow Eve

HOLLOW EVE scalped with precision pressure and scooping of pulp — wax burns inside skull brains and seeds sodden the black and white newspaper — picking bits to eat the orange crater carried and placed on the porch — cold and scary dark flame flicker-licks wounds — rounded eyes and crooked smile mock the midnight hour 10/29/2018

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Date: 11/1/2018 7:45:00 AM
Pumpkin pie anyone!...nicely crafted Kimmy...a true Hollows' Eve experience...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/30/2018 10:01:00 PM
Thank you for reminding me to carve my pumpkin (whew) than bake the seeds, and ultimately make a pumpkin pie. Nice Kim...Happy Halloween! Charlie
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Date: 10/30/2018 9:56:00 PM
these are great for Halloween, which here has not begun But it's only several hours away. That last stanza is brilliant!!
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Date: 10/30/2018 1:10:00 PM
Sweet!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! :)
Date: 10/30/2018 7:43:00 AM
Certainly in the Halloween spirit Kim. Well written. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 10/30/2018 1:21:00 AM
scalped with precision. Ouch! You grabbed my dendrites and held me captive from the first line.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2018 3:43:00 PM
LOL, Caren!
Date: 10/30/2018 12:12:00 AM
nice write...halloween in new orleans is a celebration of the 'day of the dead' ...great jazz festival
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sand!
Date: 10/29/2018 4:33:00 PM
Ok, that was totally awesome!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/29/2018 2:52:00 PM
So creepy-cool, the last stanza is my favorite!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 10/29/2018 2:23:00 PM
Love the textures & sizzlin' play-by-play Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, James! :)
Date: 10/29/2018 2:12:00 PM
And the jack-o-lantern is born. :) Really cool Kim. I liked this a lot.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 2:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, my wonderful friend!

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