Holiday Goodies

Holiday goodies, hung round the tree
They are the best you must agree
So did the dog then guess what
Up they all came, steaming hot
Next time just baubles and lights you'll see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:26 AM
thank you for the reply
Richards Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Ha ha.....this is so true to life !! I betcha it has happened more often than not !! So cute !! Congrats to you and your sense of humor !!
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Lol Carrie, lol xmas and dogs don't quite mix do they ....Seren
A   Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Linda ....Seren
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Thx Jan ....Seren
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Gave me a big smile, Seren! Love your humour! Congrats on this win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Lol i wasnt smiling, hahaha. Yes its funny now....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 3:01 PM
This was a funny one!! It took me a second to think what you meant by the fourth line and then it dawned on me.. haha. If you do limericks for me, you need consistency of the syllables for that limerick beat. Congrats, Seren.
Yvonne Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Boy, sad that is. Great limerick.
Roberts Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Lol the stupid dogs all 4 of them ate the chocolate coins and father Christmases , yep that's right they all returned as yuck....Seren
Thajudeen Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Very tasty goodies.Wishes dear poet Roberts. -Safa
Roberts Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Well the dogs thought so lol, thanks for stopping by....Seren
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 6:59 PM
clever limerick Seren:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan x
Roberts Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Lol Jan but it's the truth.....stupid dogs. Yes dogs 4 of them indulged.....Seren
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