Holiday Fun

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Jan 7, 2025 22.48pm

Funny Christmas Characters design on snow background, Santa Claus, Snowman, elf and Reindeer. Merry Christmas and Happy new year concept. Illustration isolated on blue background. Stock Vector | Adobe Stock


We see Santa and Frosty,
Having their rush shopping spree;
Buying many toys,
For all girls and boys,
Then hire ten elves to carry.

As hosts of Christmas party,
Have rock band to play loudly;
Both lead hip-hop dance,
We all look askance,
As they shake their huge belly.

Rudolph and an elf came in,
Shaking their hips with their chin;
Sway from left to right,
Hug each other tight,
Making their hosts bounce and spin.

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/7/2025 5:32:00 AM

Holiday Fun Limerick contest- Santa, Frosty, Rudolph or Elf - set of 3 Contest Judged: 1/26/2025 4:26:00 AM Place: 2 ( up to 3rd multi-w)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2025 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Fun "Holiday Fun" Limerick writes. Three Fun Pictures you have here. Hugs... Have a fun day/week with your win as you write away..................

Len Gasun
Date: 2/5/2025 8:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. Big congrats on your latest wins too. Sorry for not staying here long yet coz of my school work. But I promise to visit your page tomorrow/very soon. God bless you always and your poetry/poetic talent. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/26/2025 9:05:00 AM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet set of limericks.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/5/2025 8:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your poetry/poetic talent. I'll visit your page tomorrow, ok. Hugs

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 1/9/2025 2:15:00 PM

Wow well written and a happy new year...I love and dream to play in the snow but so sad where i am it can never happen but i believe in never say never ...lol. Glad to check up on u

Len Gasun
Date: 1/25/2025 9:36:00 PM

Happy New Year dear poet friend. So glad to see you back. Belated thank you for your visit. Hugs