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Holding Out For Hope

Holding Out For Hope How did this happen? What did I do? I try to control it I try not to believe it It happens so fast Not much I can do Manic...x...two I scream and I cry Oh no not again I know the symptoms But it creeps up to fool me Tried distracting it Tried to watch TV Walk around and around and Around the room Manic, manic, manic Top of the room feeling manic Whoopee Bipolar is here again Hoping my feet touch the ground It follows me My brain...is not sound It beckons me still Again and again I take the good and the bad Trying to cope Holding out for hope

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Date: 3/27/2018 7:30:00 PM
Shirley, this could also apply to harmony, joy, love, and God, methinks. Your imagery and adjectives make this one terrific; a keeper!
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/27/2018 7:47:00 PM
Caren...Thank you for your gracious comments ! Fast and furious the words came to me..almost to fast to write them down. It describes how I feel when I get manic. Hopefully someone will read it and understand what they cannot see or understand about mental illness. . I have bipolar disorder..manic comes with the territory. It also gives me lots of "scattered thoughts" that turn in to poems.
Date: 3/27/2018 7:25:00 PM
Light, but heavy, dear to your heart, and now dear to mine. I love this, Chelci, a true Mom's love here!
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/27/2018 7:49:00 PM
again thanks..I have a poem: A Mother's Love that you might to read. :))
Date: 3/27/2018 7:21:00 PM
Patricia, the feelings were fast and furious, and I really felt your soul here. Good one!
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 3/27/2018 7:52:00 PM
:)) I have started to read you works. Wow you have so many poems out there! I am just starting so it's good to get your encouragement :))

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