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Holding That Last Tear

I fold the moonlight into soiled papers reminding myself of torn dreams which refused to glide, of hearts that crossed different paths with such throbbing intrusion and regret. And like a vagrant of the night, the coal in the throat licks the danger of a flame set to walk on fire like burnt ash is to ember, leaving me scorched when he walks away, without giving myself that last chance to accept what the heart needed to reveal all along… if I can just spill one last tear without pride, then that inner grief would have a name-- and the movement of our eyes could sing, far beyond the language of riddled words. But my pinched voice would not open as if it twiddled on heated eggshells… a missing link of what chokes the light. ------------- One Last Tear Contest for Silent One 2/4/2019

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Date: 2/9/2019 6:11:00 AM
How strange, my comment has vanished!! Now you must think I did not congratulate you.. Fantastic poem, with a brilliant opening two lines... your poetry is on a different level at the moment.. Congrats on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/7/2019 8:55:00 AM
Woah, a visceral read. Intense. Congratulations Nette, on a fine well deserved podium finish. xomau ;)
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Date: 2/7/2019 3:30:00 AM
- Nette, congratulations on your TOP winning poem :) ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2019 8:27:00 PM
You make us feel that tear, that intrusion that refuses to leak. Congratulations on a great write nd win!
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Very well deserved!
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Date: 2/6/2019 4:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/6/2019 3:31:00 PM
Sublime, nette...congratulations poet, I really like this poem
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:34:00 PM
That final goodbye to one we love is so painful, Nette. You created unique and interesting imagery to convey how you felt. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful, Better, congratulations on your 1st place win...
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Date: 2/5/2019 10:17:00 AM
You have entered a masterpiece. I expect to see your horse with a garland around her neck at the finish line.
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Date: 2/5/2019 5:29:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, although it is sad Nette - Good luck in the contest ... my suggestion for this contest was too late :( - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2019 10:33:00 PM
Full of sorrow Nette, well written. Tom.
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Date: 2/4/2019 10:26:00 PM
Very mournful, very beautifully expressed.
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Date: 2/4/2019 7:54:00 PM
You have such a special way of expressing sorrow and loss, that you make the heart feel , of its own contrition . I loved it Nette, have a great evening, hugs xo
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Date: 2/4/2019 5:01:00 PM
Excellent write, Nette..you captured the agony of break up and the pain that lingers..well done my friend.
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Date: 2/4/2019 4:55:00 PM
Thought- provoking, erudite! Hope it's not too late to set aside pride for the sake of love's comeback.
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