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Holding Strong

Holding strong I split the grasses sovereignty Protect the fragile tubular stem Work quickly in the cool of darkness To prepare For a brightness To challenge the sun Awaken the drowsy bees Torment the gardener For I am a harbinger of spring An errant child singing off key A puppy challenging the leash A toddler consumed with itself I am the strength of yellow Soon to release my airborne offspring For Dandelions are not bound By the rules of the garden ©2/22/2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Joseph May - Sponsor

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Date: 3/7/2023 4:33:00 PM
But I hear they make a nice tea. :) A lovely poem all gardeners will applaud!
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Date: 3/7/2023 11:19:00 AM
I just love this John! Spring whimsy at its best. What a wonderful subject for the contest - the dandelion with all of its out of the box attitude! Well done! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Date: 3/7/2023 11:06:00 AM
They have no rules, Congrats on your win Very nicely done
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Date: 3/7/2023 10:14:00 AM
I like the fact that you give spring a variety of attributes that fit so nicely with your title of holding strong. Congrats!
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I Love your line, "For I am a harbinger of spring." Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:27:00 AM
Haha love this! Well deserved win for the poetic qualities of a dandelion curveball :)
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:10:00 PM
Awesomeness John. Just brilliant! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/23/2023 3:04:00 PM
They have blown all the way to Australia. A few meanings ride the winds in this poem. Engaging read. Paul
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Date: 2/23/2023 2:28:00 AM
Hello errant child, Very creative presentation. Best in the contest. Panagiota
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:34:00 AM
Dandelions are my arch nemesis. lol Your poem did make me smile. Good luck, John.
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