Holding Strong

Holding strong
I split the grasses sovereignty
Protect the fragile tubular stem
Work quickly in the cool of darkness
To prepare
For a brightness
To challenge the sun
Awaken the drowsy bees
Torment the gardener
For I am a harbinger of spring
An errant child singing off key
A puppy challenging the leash
A toddler consumed with itself
I am the strength of yellow
Soon to release my airborne offspring
For Dandelions are not bound
By the rules of the garden

©2/22/2023

In Bloom Poetry Contest
Joseph May - Sponsor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:33 PM
But I hear they make a nice tea. :) A lovely poem all gardeners will applaud!
Kauffman Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 11:19 AM
I just love this John! Spring whimsy at its best. What a wonderful subject for the contest - the dandelion with all of its out of the box attitude! Well done! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
May Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 11:06 AM
They have no rules, Congrats on your win Very nicely done
Hawley Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 10:14 AM
I like the fact that you give spring a variety of attributes that fit so nicely with your title of holding strong. Congrats!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I Love your line, "For I am a harbinger of spring." Have a blessed day...............
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:10 PM
Awesomeness John. Just brilliant! Congratulations on your win! :)
Willason Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:04 PM
They have blown all the way to Australia. A few meanings ride the winds in this poem. Engaging read. Paul
Romios Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Hello errant child, Very creative presentation. Best in the contest. Panagiota
Turner Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Dandelions are my arch nemesis. lol Your poem did make me smile. Good luck, John.
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