Holding On, Barely Holding On

So young and newly married
Hanging on by the thread of love
Sometimes though in life we see
That thread isn't wound tight enough

Through the daily struggles
Most of them unseen
What happened to the newlywed
Where went all the dreams

Holding on
Barely holding on...

A father and husband out of work
A family living out of the car
Is this the American dream we've built
Is this now where we are

Cardboard serves a purpose
As a bed and a homemade sign
To keep the cold off of the floor
Hey brother can you spare a dime

Holding on
Barely holding on...

The doctors diagnosis 
Doesn't give much hope for life
Just a simple six months ago
There was no thought of dying

Even less hope in your case
Just prolonging time
You could spend what little you have left
Or go ahead and say your goodbyes

Holding on
Barely holding on...

No matter your life's lot
The position that you hold
We're all in the same boat on the same stream
Trying to stay afloat

There are so many different scenarios
Which could haunt many a page
That in life continually follow us
Throughout all our days of

Holding on
Barely holding on...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/5/2016 10:43:00 AM
Very real and truthful. Clinton or Trump for improvement??? Or mobilise the silent majority. I guess we need new dreams...This is a good poem you wrote.
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:38:00 PM
Lots of truth in your poem about todays society Mike!:)
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Date: 9/1/2016 11:34:00 AM
Voice of the hurting...hearfelt!
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Date: 9/1/2016 10:53:00 AM
A very poignant and sobering write, Mike. It is sad so many people are living "hand to mouth". Fortunes change like the weather. It is a harsh reality. Great write!!
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Date: 9/1/2016 8:31:00 AM
So true Mike, it's the situation for most today, living because the air is free, so far anyway! Good write enjoyed it!
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