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Holding Back the Time

In visions of yesteryear where there was love Nothing but despair on the faces of hope And shattered remains of a romantic fairytale Whose happy ending has been snatched away Yet, I grind sand-grains hoping to make water Counting blindly on the blessings of a miracle Knowing well indeed it's a futile effort Like looking for sun when the night has fallen Mystique is still there much like it was then But happy tears have been doomed by sadness And the memories are demanding a hefty price Making it much harder and expensive to cry The rhythm I hear is the pulse of your song When words were precious like diamonds are But they are free now for no one responds When I call you by name in voices of the past It's been so long since you've been gone Smiles that were friendly now wear a frown Until I fantasize about the days full of awe Holding back the time to hold you in my heart But if you must go, I feel the need to know Do you ever look back, do you say hello To the years that used to be music to our souls And sit there to dream and wish there was more Written: May 17, 2019 Submitted on January 5, 2023 to: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 24 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney Poem of the day on May 19, 2019 Placed 2nd: Your choice (6) contest by Brian Strand Placed 2nd: Musical Inspiration Poetry Contest by Joseph May Song: Holding Back the Years

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Date: 1/4/2022 3:46:00 AM
A poem of haunting memories and tearful longing ! The poem pulls at the heartstrings with its deep melancholic tone. I hear the smothered sighs of an ill fated lover. Wonderfully done, Vijay !
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Date: 7/24/2019 7:59:00 PM
Such a beautiful love song. The honors are well deserved. Into my Favs. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 4:28:00 PM
You are so very kind SuZ..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 6/14/2019 8:07:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem...so many great lines. Congrat on your many standings. Jeanne
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 11:35:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Jeanne--many thanks.
Date: 6/14/2019 3:34:00 AM
Hi Vijay, my supportive friend - this is quite a beauty - 'Do you ever look back - to years that that used to be music to the soul - And wish there was more - This poem is outrageously perfect - an awesome write! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks..I appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 6/13/2019 10:32:00 AM
Bravo, Vijay. Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:39:00 PM
Many thanks Line--appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 6/13/2019 9:56:00 AM
Wow !just beautifully penned.Congratulations on your win :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:39:00 PM
Many thanks Kenisha..glad you stopped by.
Date: 6/13/2019 8:34:00 AM
This is like a stream of words flowing in rhythm...sadness feels so beautiful capturing beauty of love. It touches the reader in a very subtle way, a complex feeling made simple in your creative talent. deserves all the honor the poem has got. Congrats,.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:38:00 PM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Debjani..many thanks.
Date: 6/12/2019 1:05:00 PM
Very beautifully expressed emotions! Congratulations on your win too! -Smita
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2019 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments..much appreciate, Smita.
Date: 6/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your number one, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your amazing verse! So inspirational and moving, my friend.. This is a definite fav for me!! Have a blessed day..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2019 3:54:00 PM
You are so very kind, Robertina..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 6/12/2019 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on number 1 poem!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thank you John..much appreciate.
Date: 6/12/2019 7:32:00 AM
You are #1! A wonderful achievement. Congratulations Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..much appreciate.
Date: 6/11/2019 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay!! This poem is Ranked Number One. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2019 7:32:00 PM
You are so right--thanks for telling me..didn't know.. as it wasn't on that list till now. Much appreciate.
Date: 6/9/2019 8:10:00 PM
"The rhythm I hear is the pulse of your song" And I can feel this, through your Words. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 6/7/2019 11:34:00 AM
A beautiful rendition, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Ralph.
Date: 6/7/2019 8:06:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 6/6/2019 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Vijay well done, I picked the same song, loved your interpretation!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 6/6/2019 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 6/6/2019 12:35:00 PM
A reminiscence of lost love...Very nicely penned Vijay..Congrats on your win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 6/4/2019 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay...It's lovely...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 5/30/2019 3:33:00 PM
Great memory; I am sure that she probably looks back. Maybe fondly, maybe with regret but, we all look back. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/31/2019 6:57:00 AM
Absolutely the case. Much appreciate MLK..many thanks.
Date: 5/27/2019 2:37:00 PM
I love this song and your poem is fitting...we never really forget a lost love we didn't want to let go... Great poetry
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/28/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you SO..much appreciate.
Date: 5/26/2019 10:49:00 PM
Ah! Lost love. Beautifully penned Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/28/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Allen..much appreciate.
Date: 5/26/2019 3:40:00 AM
Wow, grinding sand into water. That is a huge metaphor. And yet we move on from an ocean of tears.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2019 7:52:00 AM
Glad you liked the metaphor..much appreciate Kai..many thanks.
Date: 5/25/2019 5:03:00 PM
Aw...I'm sad. Lost love. I often wondered did my first love ever think of me. So poignantly put Vijay. No wonder it was POTD.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2019 7:51:00 AM
You are so kind, Jean. Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.
Date: 5/25/2019 4:58:00 PM
A wonderful poem and so deserving of POTD,,LOve this, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
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