Holding Back the Time

In visions of yesteryear where there was love
Nothing but despair on the faces of hope
And shattered remains of a romantic fairytale
Whose happy ending has been snatched away

Yet, I grind sand-grains hoping to make water
Counting blindly on the blessings of a miracle
Knowing well indeed it's a futile effort
Like looking for sun when the night has fallen

Mystique is still there much like it was then
But happy tears have been doomed by sadness
And the memories are demanding a hefty price
Making it much harder and expensive to cry

The rhythm I hear is the pulse of your song
When words were precious like diamonds are
But they are free now for no one responds
When I call you by name in voices of the past

It's been so long since you've been gone
Smiles that were friendly now wear a frown
Until I fantasize about the days full of awe
Holding back the time to hold you in my heart

But if you must go, I feel the need to know
Do you ever look back, do you say hello
To the years that used to be music to our souls
And sit there to dream and wish there was more

Written: May 17, 2019
Submitted on January 5, 2023 to:
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 24 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney

Poem of the day on May 19, 2019
Placed 2nd: Your choice (6) contest by Brian Strand
Placed 2nd: Musical Inspiration Poetry Contest by Joseph May
Song: Holding Back the Years
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George Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 3:46 AM
A poem of haunting memories and tearful longing ! The poem pulls at the heartstrings with its deep melancholic tone. I hear the smothered sighs of an ill fated lover. Wonderfully done, Vijay !
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Such a beautiful love song. The honors are well deserved. Into my Favs. Hugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 4:28 PM
You are so very kind SuZ..much appreciate..many thanks.
Mcgee Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM
This is a wonderful poem...so many great lines. Congrat on your many standings. Jeanne
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments Jeanne--many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 3:34 AM
Hi Vijay, my supportive friend - this is quite a beauty - 'Do you ever look back - to years that that used to be music to the soul - And wish there was more - This poem is outrageously perfect - an awesome write! Hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks..I appreciate your visit and comments.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Bravo, Vijay. Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win.
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Many thanks Line--appreciate your kind feedback.
Shines Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Wow !just beautifully penned.Congratulations on your win :)
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Many thanks Kenisha..glad you stopped by.
Mitra Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 8:34 AM
This is like a stream of words flowing in rhythm...sadness feels so beautiful capturing beauty of love. It touches the reader in a very subtle way, a complex feeling made simple in your creative talent. deserves all the honor the poem has got. Congrats,.
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Debjani..many thanks.
Kulkarni Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Very beautifully expressed emotions! Congratulations on your win too! -Smita
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments..much appreciate, Smita.
B. Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your number one, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your amazing verse! So inspirational and moving, my friend.. This is a definite fav for me!! Have a blessed day..
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 3:54 PM
You are so very kind, Robertina..much appreciate..many thanks.
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on number 1 poem!!
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thank you John..much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:32 AM
You are #1! A wonderful achievement. Congratulations Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Heidi..much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Congratulations Vijay!! This poem is Ranked Number One. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 7:32 PM
You are so right--thanks for telling me..didn't know.. as it wasn't on that list till now. Much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 8:10 PM
"The rhythm I hear is the pulse of your song" And I can feel this, through your Words. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Sergi Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 11:34 AM
A beautiful rendition, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Ralph.
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June 7, 2019 at 8:06 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Congrats Vijay well done, I picked the same song, loved your interpretation!
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you John.
Sands Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Heidi.
May Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:35 PM
A reminiscence of lost love...Very nicely penned Vijay..Congrats on your win..
Pandit Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Michael Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations Vijay...It's lovely...
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Great memory; I am sure that she probably looks back. Maybe fondly, maybe with regret but, we all look back. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Absolutely the case. Much appreciate MLK..many thanks.
One Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 2:37 PM
I love this song and your poem is fitting...we never really forget a lost love we didn't want to let go... Great poetry
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you SO..much appreciate.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Ah! Lost love. Beautifully penned Vijay
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you Allen..much appreciate.
Neumann Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:40 AM
Wow, grinding sand into water. That is a huge metaphor. And yet we move on from an ocean of tears.
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Glad you liked the metaphor..much appreciate Kai..many thanks.
Murray Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Aw...I'm sad. Lost love. I often wondered did my first love ever think of me. So poignantly put Vijay. No wonder it was POTD.
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:51 AM
You are so kind, Jean. Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 4:58 PM
A wonderful poem and so deserving of POTD,,LOve this, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
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