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Holding Back Tears

He was five
And I was ten
I loved his heart
His soul and gentleness

He had my heart
From the time I met him
When Mama brought him home
With his bottle of milk

I worshipped that child
His yellow hair and blue eyes
Smiling into mine
Lighting up my thoughts

Then a doctor said
“He has to have surgery”
Promised it would be easy
No reason at all to worry

Mama and Daddy took him in
For the operation
Stayed there with him for the time
It took to know he was ok

I stayed home and waited
Never worried for a moment
God would take care of him
He was such an angel, my brother

Then Mama and Daddy came in
Pale and swollen eyed
I didn’t have it in me to ask
I could see it without a word spoken

Little brother died that day
And for so many years
Holding back tears
Got me through the pain and grief 





This or That, Vol 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
July 29, 2021
(This is my pastor's story.. I'm just retelling it for the contest - I haven't ever had a brother)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/30/2021 1:09:00 AM
So sad Gina, the only consolation you have is that he's in a better place and I believe that one day you'll be reunited in paradise. Tom
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Date: 7/29/2021 8:53:00 PM
You just made me cry, Regina, a heart ranching verse to hear a baby has been lost. Good luck in Edward's contest.
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Date: 7/29/2021 8:41:00 PM
So wonderfully written; sadness which did not seem too sad.
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:53:00 PM
Oh Gina! I’m sorry you ever had to lose your much adored baby brother! That’s a loss that never really goes away. You wrote a poignant poem about it. People who lost any child in their lives should read this.
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