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Holding a Small Hand

my hands are worn with age her hands are plump with youth the loving is the same though In their clasp there is a truth I hold the future in my hand she holds memories of the past her grandma is the tie that binds One day she will understand at last such trust in her little grasp and security and love in mine together we will walk the path I know for her stars will yet align Holding hands a lovely treasure A small gift given without measure...
Barbara Gorelick 12/13/13 With These Hands contest Visual # 2

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Date: 1/15/2014 9:32:00 PM
CONGRATS
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:08:00 PM
nice win Barbara....PD
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Date: 1/3/2014 4:00:00 PM
love the show of contrast, BG.. cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 1/2/2014 10:40:00 PM
Yours is so sweet, Barbara. Big congrats for your win and happy new year, dear.
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:11:00 PM
beautiful write Barbara...congrats on your win
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Date: 1/2/2014 1:58:00 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, BARBARA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Barbara
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Date: 12/20/2013 6:18:00 AM
Don't know if the contest has been judged yet or not, but you have a strong contender here. Lovely and sweet poem :)
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Date: 12/15/2013 5:27:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that I chose to read this one today..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 3:56:00 PM
You are so lucky to have grandchildren! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2013 8:19:00 PM
Barbara wonderful poem good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:11:00 PM
Fantastic from top to bottom...loved it Barbara...
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Date: 12/14/2013 8:45:00 AM
It is an awesome poem!, Barbara, keep your pen in hand! Merry Christmas! chuck
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Date: 12/14/2013 1:19:00 AM
wow, what a sweet poem . You make me want to try this contest now~~
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:07:00 PM
How wonderful. I could visualize a grandmother and granddaughter walking together down a path of memories and new experiences.
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Date: 12/13/2013 6:39:00 PM
The sentiment is the way I feel when holding my grandchild's hand. Just lovely!
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:17:00 PM
- So beautiful ..... perfect for Visual # 2 - Good luck in Nettes contest, Barbara! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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