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Hold My Beer

A quiet one brimming with rising confidence
A boisterous one with a fear that is immense
When the moment is here
And the choice becomes clear
It is the quiet one shouting hold my beer in defense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 7:46 PM
The more I read this one, the more interesting it gets. ~ Holding on
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:43 PM
Gotta keep an eye on those who can 'hold their beer.' :) gw
Delegans Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:59 PM
Yes! Thanks for the visit, Gershon.
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:49 AM
Your great poem cleverly uses contrast to tell a story. It begins by presenting two different characters and then surprises with an unexpected twist. The line "hold my beer" humorously suggests that the quiet one unexpectedly takes charge.
Delegans Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:57 PM
Thank you for the compliment and sharing how you enjoyed it.
Smith  Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Got to watch the quiet ones.... 😂
Delegans Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:56 PM
Indeed we do!
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