Hold Back the Night

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Song about trying to find love...

Hold back the night

She was a chestnut haired beauty,
standing there all alone...
I knew that I... had to get close to her,

She had a stare that could melt 
your heart... if she wanted to...
I felt... something deep and warm start to stir

The night was still young, but both
of us well... not so much...
I knew that I... had to make her mine

She had an elegant way, and a soft...
tender touch...
If I could...I'd hold back... the hands of time


Chorus
So please hold back the night,
I don't want this to end
everything feels so right,
this is true...not pretend
so please, hold back the night,
please don't say we're just friends
so please hold back the night,
wish this night never ends


She told me straight to my face...
that, love was not kind to her...
I could see she needed, someone to hold

I wrapped my arms around...
and I tried to comfort her...
Cos, too many times she'd been left in the cold


Chorus
So please hold back the night,
I don't want this to end
everything feels so right,
this is true...not pretend
so please, hold back the night,
please don't say we're just friends
so please hold back the night,
wish this night never ends


We spent the night at the station...
waiting for the early train
I fought desperately to hold back the night

She said I'd made her feel better...
would we ever meet again?
I said sure... cos it just felt so right


Chorus
So please hold back the night,
I don't want this to end
everything feels so right,
this is true...not pretend
so please, hold back the night,
please don't say we're just friends
so please hold back the night,
wish this night never ends


I called her two days later to see...
if she was ok
She said, that she ...was doing just fine

I didn't know, that Toronto would
be our favorite place
So glad... I tried to hold back... that night


Chorus
So please hold back the night,
I don't want this to end
everything feels so right,
this is true...not pretend
so please, hold back the night,
please don't say we're just friends
so please hold back the night,
wish this night never ends

please hold back the night
please hold back the night
please hold back the night

fade to zero

John Derek Hamilton
February 17, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/4/2018 3:31:00 PM
what a gift to sing!
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/4/2018 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Donna!
Date: 2/19/2018 12:53:00 PM
I saw how you told someone here that it just flowed from you. That is what makes your gift so special. When you can do a romantic poem like this and it just flows! And thanks for your romantic contest!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/19/2018 9:02:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/18/2018 11:35:00 AM
What a gorgeous romantic piece!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Rick, nice of you to drop by with your kind words, glad you liked it!
Date: 2/17/2018 8:21:00 PM
Nice write, like to hear it when its put to music.!!!! Love mom
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Mom, glad you liked it! Love you!
Date: 2/17/2018 3:28:00 PM
I just had a Meatloaf moment listening to your lyrics.. i mean the singer not the food.. love that chorus...
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2018 8:02:00 AM
That's a huge compliment, Meatloaf's writer wrote for Celine Dion and many others, kind of a theatrical style.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thanks So!
Date: 2/17/2018 3:11:00 PM
Another great one John. :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Heidi!
Date: 2/17/2018 2:58:00 PM
You are a songwriter my friend...And with a lovely song on your hand...all left to do is sing it...
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/17/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, it felt good as it flowed!
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