Hold Back the Dawn

One early morning in May
Just before the break of day,
I spied a haggard looking Sun
Appearing to be on the run,
Bedraggled but feigning zest
Oh, was seen rising from the west!

Sneaking behind some clouds,
Like a thief hiding in shrouds,
Scurrying towards home eastwise, 
From where each morn he must rise.

The sun it seems got lost,
Carousing out and about
after all night on a hot date
with a pretty twinkling starlet,
Dancing away to the rhythm and rhyme,
Alas, the sun failed to rise on time!

Scared of what Mother Nature would say
Why didn't he in the east stay,
And terrified of Father Time
the sun could not smile or shine.

The day failed to dawn that way,
And the world got to sleep another day!


Story Poem contest by Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Congrats on your number one placement!
Mandani Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Richard.
George   Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 3:58 PM
very CREATIVE!!!!Abdul. Great personification. Elaine C. George
Mandani Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks for your comments.
Carter Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Love this! So well done congrats !
Y. Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Abdul, congratulations on a your big win it was well deserved:-)Alexis
A   Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:14 AM
nice win..SK
Muzzey Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Congrats Abdul on your fine win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. ~Caryl
Mandani Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Thanks Caryl, appreciate much.
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on a superb first place win! I enjoyed this clever piece with awesome imagery! Well done and a 7! Pandita.
Mandani Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Pandita. Appreciate much.
Gifford Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 10:23 AM
On days the sun fails to shine, now I know why! Enjoyed your poem and good luck in the contest. Darlene
Mandani Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Thanks Darlene.
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 3:26 PM
wonderful imagery good luck in the contst:-) hugs Jan xx
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