Hocus Potus

he lies unwise makes threats folks fret trade war what for? unfit should quit mind's dim sack him

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2025 1:23:00 PM

- Footle poems look so simple... but, I find them difficult - Well done, Jim :) - hugs

Jim Healey
Date: 3/19/2025 2:15:00 PM

They are deceptively difficult, aren’t they? Thank you Anne-Lise. Take care. J.

Jan Terry

Date: 3/11/2025 7:14:00 PM

Well said. We could each add a verse. This could grow 'hugely'. Plenty of material to work with. Lol

Jim Healey
Date: 3/11/2025 8:40:00 PM

I would certainly be open to a collaboration! Please send verses. I will add those that I like and give you proper credit.

Sand Blown

Date: 3/11/2025 2:17:00 PM

hocus pot-us for sure man.....len

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/11/2025 10:15:00 AM

Hear hear! Elbows up ;), xomo

Jim Healey
Date: 3/11/2025 1:46:00 PM

Elbows up, indeed!!! Thanks, Maureen.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/11/2025 8:58:00 AM

view's dim/fire him

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2025 9:40:00 AM

sure... my pleasure

Jim Healey
Date: 3/11/2025 9:04:00 AM

Just added an extra verse. Thanks for the idea.

Jim Healey
Date: 3/11/2025 9:00:00 AM

I like it!