Hocus Potus

he lies
unwise

makes threats
folks fret

trade war
what for?

unfit
should quit

mind's dim
sack him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 1:23 PM
- Footle poems look so simple... but, I find them difficult - Well done, Jim :) - hugs
Healey Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 2:15 PM
They are deceptively difficult, aren’t they? Thank you Anne-Lise. Take care. J.
Terry Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 7:14 PM
Well said. We could each add a verse. This could grow 'hugely'. Plenty of material to work with. Lol
Healey Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 8:40 PM
I would certainly be open to a collaboration! Please send verses. I will add those that I like and give you proper credit.
Blown Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 2:17 PM
hocus pot-us for sure man.....len
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 10:15 AM
Hear hear! Elbows up ;), xomo
Healey Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 1:46 PM
Elbows up, indeed!!! Thanks, Maureen.
Lane Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 8:58 AM
view's dim/fire him
Lane Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:40 AM
sure... my pleasure
Healey Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Just added an extra verse. Thanks for the idea.
Healey Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 9:00 AM
I like it!
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