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He lived in the basement hairy and mischievous haunting the unwary helpless little household. How could they get rid of him? Shakespeare found a way: Had him Puck in a play! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Pleiades - H Sponsor: Kim Merryman © 18th February 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 7/8/2017 3:26:00 AM

Quite humorous Paul - and a clever way to get rid of the 'pestiferous hairy little beast' Shakespeare made a Puck out of him- Loved it...Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2017 5:39:00 AM

Thank you for getting acquainted with my hobgoblin, Maria:) Regards // paul. ps I think I have now read all your poems...some more than once!

Funom Makama

Date: 3/6/2017 11:08:00 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2017 3:45:00 PM

You are extremely generous, Funom! Thank you very much! Best regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/24/2017 5:58:00 AM

Now I understand why this beauty was not seen on the winner's list, Paul:) I was searching for this one, deserves to be a winner:) a 7 once again from me :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 2:51:00 PM

Thank you for coming back, and for the faith you had in this entry, Jo:) The hobgoblin played havoc with my Pleiades!:)) Regards // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2017 6:40:00 PM

Paul, this is so cute and fun! Flows very smoothly, too. I noticed that it says you entered it in my contest but it didn't show up. I don't know what happened. It's very good, though and would have placed high. Blessings,Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 2:57:00 PM

I'm so pleased that you like it, Kim! I did enter it in your contest, but these glitches occur quite often, so don't worry about it...it's not your fault:) Looking forward to your next contest. Blessings, and have a nice weekend...paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 7:01:00 AM

Very clever, Paul, Kim is sure to love this:) a 7:)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/22/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thank you, Jo :) The little imp found his way into my Pleiades, too :) Regards ~ paul

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/22/2017 1:39:00 AM

Paul, You wrote this so well using wit, cleverness and a knowledge of Shakespeare's Midsummer Night's Dream. Very nice! My best, chuck

Paul Callus
Date: 2/22/2017 8:41:00 AM

Your feedback is truly appreciated, Chuck; thank you! Regards // paul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/21/2017 8:41:00 AM

Perfect! a classic, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jimbo. I hope your arm has healed well! Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 2/20/2017 9:16:00 PM

Too cute Paul. This really made me smile. Wonderful flow and very witty theme. You truly are a clever writer. Bravo. Good luck in the contest. A winner for sure in my book. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:29:00 PM

You are too kind, Judy...thank you for the lovely comments and the faith you show in this entry. Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2017 8:57:00 PM

Oh what a cute ending this has. You picked a most original theme, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I've come across some very good entries, too. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/20/2017 1:31:00 PM

Great verse, Paul, wonderful flow, great subject a 7 and good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:22:00 PM

Thank you for your generosity, Eve!! Hugs // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/19/2017 3:17:00 PM

This is clever, Paul! Very good. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, Laura:) I enjoyed your entry, too! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2017 12:32:00 PM

Smiling!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:09:00 PM

A smile is a good sign, Richard...thank you for stopping by. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2017 9:17:00 AM

While not familiar with the Pleiades form, I did get a good laugh when I read about "Puck" from Midsummer Night's Dream. A delightful poem, Paul. The mischievous character comes to life. Best wishes in the contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. "A Midsummer Night's Dream" is one of my favourites. Glad you got a laugh out of this...hugs // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/19/2017 4:15:00 AM

A fun and brilliant write... A big 7.. Good luck with the contest...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 4:03:00 PM

So pleased that you found it to your liking, Supraja...thank you! Regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/19/2017 2:13:00 AM

Great humour in this write. Love that word, 'Hobgoblin'

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth. You like 'Hobgoblin' and I like 'fizgig' :) Pleased to have you stopping by. // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/18/2017 10:40:00 PM

Great! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/19/2017 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Arthur; 'great' means a lot coming from you:) Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2017 7:07:00 PM

Love the cute imagery and humour here Paul:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 2/19/2017 1:46:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Jan :) Good luck to you, too...hugs // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/18/2017 5:51:00 PM

A really fun read, cute title :-) my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/19/2017 1:20:00 PM

How lovely it is to have you back, Lynn Marie:) Thank you for stopping, reading and commenting! Warm regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/18/2017 1:18:00 PM

Ha ha...we all have that little Mr Nobody living in our houses. Enjoyed your poem and the subject you chose. Hugs, SuZ

Paul Callus
Date: 2/19/2017 1:02:00 PM

:) I hope you won't get a squatter like that in your new house, Suz :) Thank you for a pleasant visit. Hugs // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/18/2017 10:47:00 AM

Very good Paul, best wishes in the contest... to

Paul Callus
Date: 2/19/2017 9:12:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Charlie...thank you. // paul