Hoar Frost

HOAR     FROST



Multi-fingered trees drowned in the mist
Mist like the cold hand of death coming to Ramses
Last night’s mist  -  purifying spirit
Enveloping all in the frost


Like a well-tended graveyard
Dead, silent, nothing moves
The ugly old dead trees  - and
The lovely young live trees
Are levelled, enveloped,
Masked in a white shroud
Each tree  -  asleep, dead
Recreated in white
Born again of water and Holy Spirit
Ready to enter the kingdom of heaven.
All souls look alike
All the trees look alike
New souls reborn sinless
Souls of trees waiting


These ghost trees are not real trees
Their previous life forgotten, bees and  pollen
All sensual feeling numbed
Their tree souls purified
Pure innocence  -  sin free
Prepared for tree heaven
Cold joy of heaven


Ah….the forgotten delights
Of being a larch or elder or oak.
The warmly imperfect summer life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/17/2010 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:18:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful write and win tonight..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:03:00 PM
Sydney, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun reading your entry and selecting this fine poem for my contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in P.D.'s contest " Any Poem Goes* Any Poem"". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2010 4:48:00 PM
Lovely free verse! Light & Love
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Date: 9/18/2010 4:47:00 PM
Hi there! You write a poem about a sailor's moon, then you go to the Contests: by Members pages on the left side of this page, click, then you scroll down to the contest titled Harvest Moon, then you click ENTER CONTEST & your poems will be listed in alphabetical order, find your sailors moon poem click the dot and then the enter contest spot! done!
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:41:00 PM
wow! a very awesome poem. Well done expressing what might be the life of great trees. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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