Hitler's Watercolours

This one’s a castle; that’s a customs-house.
They’re stolid, listless, just a little dull.
The sky supports an arbitrary gull.
The languidness of Liszt, the style of Strauss

are wholly absent. Colours are metallic.
The eye sweeps over cornice, turret, steeple,
then it dawns on us – there are no people.
Clock towers, mountains, minarets, all phallic,

are void of human life.  Stark, empty chairs
adorn each arid, motionless interior.
As we apprise, eyes sneeringly superior,
we note acerbically his love of stairs –

A Will to Power, ever pushing up.
One daub there is, however, gives us pause:
it dates long before Enabling Laws,
before he dreamed of Kesselring or Krupp:

a bridge that’s quite impossible to cross,
going nowhere, has never carried traffic.
With a boy sitting on it. Startling, graphic,
without a hint of Schadenfreude or Schloss.

Self-portrait, this? What features may we trace?
What’s here vouchsafed? Incipient racist brute?
Hardly. A disarmingly awful suit,
and most revealingly of all – he has no face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Dear Michael, your poem is brilliantly conceived and composed! You've captured the stunted artistry, the soulless renditions, the obsession with phallic symbols, but most amazingly, the vacant-space-where-his-face-should-be self-portrait with your limitless poetic finesse and unique poetic perspective. A fav for me! Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Your golden pen shines! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Susan what can I say? That's the most exquisite assessment of one of mu poems that I've ever received. 'Thank you' seems feeble, but I am very grateful. M;ichael
Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 1:44 PM
M: Now I confess & reveal I'm weird - I can't read Hitler or slave poems anymore, so I didn't experience your poem. I'm aware of the writer's talent, so I wanted very much to come over with my congratulations. OH, MY GOSH, YOU ARE IN 2ND PLACE!! HOW COOL IS THAT? Someone should kick me for not entering mile 10. I see, below, that you're having a great time in the marathon. I am, too, except for poem selection, that's the hard part and we've, what? 16 more, 16 decisions, oh my. Tie your shoes
Coy Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 2:04 PM
CayCay, if you'd entered every phase, the rest of us would have no chance! Thank you so much for your generous words! Warm regards, Michael
Toney Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Michael, I enjoyed the ekphrastic nature of this one. You are so eclectic in your writing! Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 10 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 11 has already started.
Toney Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Michael. The standings can be found in my current blog post.
Coy Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Mark, this competition is a masterpiece! What a clever idea! I can't remember ever having so much enjoyment in a poetry contest. And thank you for your kind comments. Where are you posting the 10-mile updates? Regards, Michael
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