Notes About The Poem

hitchhiking to mars

We’ll hitchhike to mars
on a rocket not a car,
so say your au revoirs.

We’ll steer towards Polaris, the north star
right through the center of the milky-way-bar.
See, the universe is dark and chocolatey.

Stars that glitter like multi-faceted gems,
are just shiny, yellow, peanut M&Ms,
take a handful, if you’d like, they’re free.

We’ll dodge the silhouetted moon,
which is made of enough coconut macaroon,
to make a French confectioner swoon.

As we go streaking, like a comet’s tail,
drag a finger through Saturn’s rings as well,
those are made of marshmallow.

We’ll  pass nebulae made of cotton-kandi,
and here’s a fact Einstein would have found handy,
the speed of light doesn’t apply to candy.
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Ramble on by Toni Jevicky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Pettit Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Literary sweetness!
Vionet Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Thanks! =]
Conn Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 7:18 PM
Mar-vellous, cept I don't have any clean underwear's. =]
Vionet Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 6:20 AM
I have a couple of extras. =]
Fallica Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 4:25 PM
<3 . Geeze Anais! This is one SO sweet, my eyeballs got cavities! Geeze!
Vionet Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 6:29 PM
I was dying for some candy - one of those chocolate covered Payday bars - but I was too tired to bother.
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Willy Wonka would be proud!!!….
Vionet Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 6:30 PM
When youer in the mood for a candy bar there's no substitute!
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