hitchhiking to mars

We’ll hitchhike to mars
on a rocket not a car,
so say your au revoirs.

We’ll steer towards Polaris, the north star
right through the center of the milky-way-bar.
See, the universe is dark and chocolatey.

Stars that glitter like multi-faceted gems,
are just shiny, yellow, peanut M&Ms,
take a handful, if you’d like, they’re free.

We’ll dodge the silhouetted moon,
which is made of enough coconut macaroon,
to make a French confectioner swoon.

As we go streaking, like a comet’s tail,
drag a finger through Saturn’s rings as well,
those are made of marshmallow.

We’ll  pass nebulae made of cotton-kandi,
and here’s a fact Einstein would have found handy,
the speed of light doesn’t apply to candy.
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Ramble on by Toni Jevicky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/24/2025 1:35:00 PM
Literary sweetness!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/24/2025 1:43:00 PM
Thanks! =]
Date: 6/20/2025 7:18:00 PM
Mar-vellous, cept I don't have any clean underwear's. =]
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/21/2025 6:20:00 AM
I have a couple of extras. =]
Date: 6/20/2025 4:25:00 PM
<3 . Geeze Anais! This is one SO sweet, my eyeballs got cavities! Geeze!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/20/2025 6:29:00 PM
I was dying for some candy - one of those chocolate covered Payday bars - but I was too tired to bother.
Date: 6/20/2025 12:51:00 PM
Hey I like it, even if you did cheat a bit on the candy rhyme thingy. Seriously, this was whimsical and fun. I did something similar but darker on Last dance amid the stars
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/20/2025 6:30:00 PM
Ha! You threw a flag on me! Argh!
Date: 6/20/2025 12:13:00 PM
Willy Wonka would be proud!!!….
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/20/2025 6:30:00 PM
When youer in the mood for a candy bar there's no substitute!
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