Afolabi Muideen Poet Ode

Hit Me With Your Best Shot

Hit me with your best shot


I am the keeper
I leave between
Heaven
and Earth, I am the tallest
I am the fastest
I am the seer
But the Might above all, hit
me with your best shot
How clever are you?
How agile a computer are you?
And how good as angel are you?
And how bad a Lucifer are you?
I keep day and night
Hit me with your best shot
Do you have etiquette?
Do you have netiquette?
What are your impact in progress?
How many people have you shown the right way?
How many people have you misled on the right may?
How many people does your actions extrude tears of sorrow in their eyes?
How many people does your actions extrude tears of joy in their eyes?
What are your actions that undermined you that you would saw His
mercy on the day of judgement?
No one had ever escaped me, I am the keeper that
keeping good and bad deed. HIT
ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT.


7/3/15
Contest: Triple threat
Sponsored by Casarah Nance.

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Shadow Hamilton July 10, 2015 at 5:28 PM both sides of the coin A.M impressive write hugs 7

Funom Makama July 9, 2015 at 7:17 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2015 at 8:06 AM Afolabi you said strikingly!! Each line a thought provoker!!! full of wisdom. powerful!~Olive ELoisa

Connie Marcum Wong July 6, 2015 at 2:32 AM The yin and yang, push and pull, your words define you in this descriptive creative piece Afolabi!

Emile Pinet July 5, 2015 at 5:39 PM Your words are descriptive and float their message onto the page with a steady hand and a splash of wisdom that captures the reader's imagination and attention. Emile.

Paul Callus July 4, 2015 at 4:28 PM A creative and expressive take on this theme, Afolabi! You have hit with your best shot! All the best. // paul

James Fraser July 4, 2015 at 3:49 PM Strong meaning with delightful power Afolabi, blessed Sunday to you, James :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2015 at 2:59 PM - This hit me .... I hope it hit perfectly in the contest, good luck ! - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France July 4, 2015 at 12:03 PM AM, powerful intense forceful and wonderful, and thanks for visiting my poem, Jacqueline

Kp Nunez July 4, 2015 at 8:02 AM Intense! You do know what you want to get across. All the best in the contest!

Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 7:53 AM I felt the power behind your verse! Good luck in the contest.

Nette Onclaud July 4, 2015 at 5:58 AM afolabi, a most forceful verse with intense lines... greeat job!.. huggs