Hit Me With a Swift Kick

Hit Me With A Swift Kick

Wandering amongst roving clouds of time
often staggering with that precious load.
My memory stuffed full of heart and rhyme
I carry this burden down a dark road.

Poetry demands writing when it calls
fast flood rushes in, all over my mind.
Blasting the words, torrents from water falls
darkness leaps forward to ever remind.

Telling the bad, along with the sweet good
then as if to hit me with a swift kick.
Flaying my sad heart and knowing I should
images coming that seal the wicked trick.

Inspiration flies in my writing ways
don't try to be so damn good and clever
So like selfish prayers in epic, sad days
spit the bad, stop acting like I've never.

So lost in those stubborn, confusing thoughts
Ripped my net, released all fish just caught!

Robert J. Lindley, 12-25-2015

Syllables Per Line:	
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables:	180

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Date: 2/10/2016 6:49:00 PM
Hi Robert, firstly i am sorry for having been away so long. I must say that poetry is indeed demanding as you say. Writing more from the heart than the mind, the heart's call is always there to write. Your words are so true Robert, we write what is there the good or the bad.My problem is always keeping the first catch. That;s what happens when you write from the heart. Your poetic journeys whether along a happy or sad road always have meaning Robert. Let your pen sing. A 7 my friend....Vlad.
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:57:00 PM
You're catching wonderful poetic words with your net. You're right about poetry being demanding when it calls... sometimes my mind is a jumble of lines, and not always for the same poem. Loving your writes as always, Robert.
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:46:00 AM
I really enjoyed this piece my friend, it's raw and REAL. Sometimes I need to ring out my metaphorical soaking wet sponge in my head! Your metaphors read awesome..:),jill
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:30:00 AM
Mark makes and interesting observation, you do favor structured poetry and you are very good at it. I wonder if you would enjoy the experience of breaking all the rules and allow your mind to wonder and wander at will.
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:59:00 PM
Nice idea, Rick. I hope he tries it, and I've no doubt he might fight against but it would be equally as good.
Date: 1/3/2016 12:31:00 AM
A disciplined write, the syllable counting is a jolly nuisance. I tip my hat to you. I notice you do a lot of structured writes and it's definitely a great skill you possess.
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