His Wish For Her

His wish for her was so much more
With such passion he felt a spark
To her his love was a closed door
Her promise to a soul so dark

With such passion he felt a spark
So sad the way dark beat her face
Her promise to a soul so dark
His want, secure her a safe place

So sad the way dark beat her face
Rich daddy fond of one so dark
His want, secure her a safe place
Riches have left her with their mark 

Rich daddy fond of one so dark
To her his love was a closed door
Riches have left her with their mark 
His wish for her was so much more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 9:35 AM
So moving - the last two lines are so intriguing!
Adams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thank you Michelle, glad you liked it......p
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 5:43 PM
What a fun form. Well done, Pat.
Adams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Line. Trying something new.........pat
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