His Wait

I move along my path in cosmic silence, a boulder to those shiny stones, the stars I keep in sight. The many times I curve around the radiating fountain of my force seems everlasting. The space I travel through is vast, and yet. . . . to the eye of my Creator, this voyage I make is but a jaunt. His wait for me to cease will have been a pittance of a pause. I believe this has lost twice. Trying for third time a charm. hahaha
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Babcock Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Congrats on this awesome poem. love phyl
Poet Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win.Loved it on first read.Glad to share the placement with you.
Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Larger than the depth of soul. The vastness darker than black coal. His vision sees beyond perception. As we await our new conception.
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Andrea. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Congrats Andrea for your well deserved placing in Brian`s contest...Wonderful piece,well written...
Burch Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on your continued success...lol Well done in Brian's contest! big hugs,love deb
Carrillo Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 7:25 PM
This is short, but very profound. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Austin Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:48 AM
I like your short live story. Makes sense. Love, daver
Horne Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:07 AM
yes, indeed - thought provoking and deep write here, andrea
Collins Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Well said, sweet friend.
Dey Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:53 PM
Love this poetic beauty.
Maverick Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 2:44 PM
A very pertinant and pithy write on the pittance of his pause Andrea..) take care Joe...
Horne Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:44 AM
love this deep write, my friend
Owens Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Wow! This is so deep and spiritual...I love it...And thanks for all the nice comments...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:07 AM
well quite breathtaking write Andrea.. definite expression of inner persona luv.. is it for contest? good luck if so.. the words used are simply phenomenal ..too.. luv..
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:01 AM
Excellent work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Don't know if it is for a contest or not..I guess we will see..Thanks for stopping by...I had written a few while on vacation and just posted a little this morn..Sara
Green Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 11:50 PM
very good as always,,great to see ya again,,trying to get back up on the soup...
Poet Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 11:10 PM
A soulful journey!!!Love it!Best wishes Andrea.
Pickett Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Well done.. The rhythmic flow and word play is immaculate in this creative poem.. What a beauty..:JP]
Chircop Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Ow geee.. i feel like i'm getting out of my body in a journey to meet my creator and its seems so serene and wonderful.. beautiful!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 5:50 AM
You got me thinking this morning, Andrea! A great write which could have many interpretations. I love that. Have a great day!! Rhonda
Williams Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 2:04 AM
Andrea, ah but in that short jaunt, you move mountains with your words..David
Henderson Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 1:15 AM
Andi you make it look so so easy. This is nice. Charles
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