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His Vacation In Bermuda-8 word challenge

His Vacation In Bermuda-8 word challenge candy drops rain on drought stricken crops her triple treats spiraled without any stops his eyes span kaleidoscope he rushes to open her envelope ten years celibacy ending with hollow pops the sweetness curls of her perpetual motion the cacophony of waves pounding his ocean a hooker curbs his hysteria of soothing his chaotic area Bermuda triangle's apocalypse, for him a godsend connie pachecho 9/20/17 1. HYSTERIA 2. KALEIDOSCOPE 3. PERPETUAL 4. CHAOTIC 5. CACOPHONY 6. APOCALYPSE 7. SPIRALED 8. HOLLOW This poem I didn't enter. I feel it wouldn't smell a rose. I like the title, ending, how everything ties together but it would never place.

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