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His Type of Valentine

Does your heart still miss a beat When you get that special smile Do you always try for him - Just to go that extra mile. Do you still buy the pressies On those very special days And take him for an odd weekend Of course, that's when he pays. Have you kept that sparkle up After very many years Can you still make up with him After rows and salty tears. Would you stand behind him If others turned their back Compliment, assure him If his ego took a whack. If he was redundant Could you stretch a loving hand Would your love outweigh the cash If you'r loosing twenty grand. If you answer, yes to these It seems to me, as though That's you're his perfect valentine And he really loves you so. Go on and be outrageous You've been really sweet and meek Just book an online holiday With him, of course next week

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Date: 2/20/2009 3:40:00 AM
Déirdre nice poem...Raul
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Date: 2/15/2009 6:23:00 AM
If only people could appreciate it when women are this way, sadly most do not. Very creative writing, hope you had a good valentine's day.....Aleera
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:21:00 AM
lovely poem deirdre very witty
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Date: 2/14/2009 12:42:00 AM
Thanks for your witty response Deirdre.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:27:00 PM
Dierdre, what a delightful verse! Poetry soup has undoubtedly attracted some amazing talent. Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:54:00 AM
Have a great Valentines Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:27:00 PM
This is wonderful! It is humorous and sweet. A lovely Valentine message! Well done! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:25:00 PM
very sweet & neat! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:23:00 PM
Yes , Deirdre , as only you can , with that special blend of witty charm .... Well done & enjoy that hol .......
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:56:00 AM
Deirde - What a cleaver and witty poem that is just beautifully written (Your not a travel agent are you) and of which sells the reader on the message of the poem - Wonderful poetry - God Bless, MJ
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